[darcs-devel] darcs patch: overhaul the darcs.net front page.

[Max Battcher]

"efficient to use" sounds fine.

As for this:
"This smartness lets you respond to changing demands in ways that
would otherwise not be possible. Learn more about spontaneous branches
with darcs."

My suggestion:
"Darcs lets you respond to changing demands in ways that are tough to
do in other systems, such as the ability to create ad-hoc branches."

On 8/31/06, Juliusz Chroboczek <Juliusz.Chroboczek at pps.jussieu.fr> wrote:
> Applied to the unstable branch, by Mark's request.
>
> I fully agree with Eric -- the ``Hello, I'm'' sounds wrong to European ears.
>
> There are three things I dislike: ``smartness'', ``spontaneous branches''
> and ``efficient to use''.  Help from native speakers welcome.
>
>                                        Juliusz
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