[Replicant] [PATCH v2][ 03/11] freedom-privacy-security-issues: Improve the modem definition

[Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli]

On Wed, 07 Jun 2017 10:27:39 +0300
Paul Kocialkowski <contact at paulk.fr> wrote:

> > How about the following phrasing:
> > 
> > This component embeds a powerful processor that runs an operating
> > system, along
> > with dedicated memory and storage that can be dedicated or shared
> > with the main
> > processor.  
> 
> Going with:
> " This component embeds a powerful processor that runs an operating
> system, along with dedicated volatile memory. Its storage can be
> dedicated or shared with the main processor. "
Your version is even better.
Feel free to merge it with your improved version.

Denis.
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